Before writing any screenplay a good thing is to test your idea with a LOGLINE. A logline is a short synopsis written in about 25 words about your story. This is my attempt a while ago at logline.it
- When a ruthless bank robber finds a gate to a parallel universe, any crime seems possible to escape, until the other self gets to take the blame
At logline.it you can submit your logline and get feedback from others like you! There are also some “judges” that usually give very good feedback both about language and story. Comments usually mention already made films with similar story that you might not have seen which prevents you write a movie that is already made.
I just like playing with ideas, and I usually give some feedback back to others.
Here’s some rules (guidelines) when writing loglines given by “sharkeatingman”, one of the judges.
L = Lead. This is your protagonist. Unless they are famous and are a household name, do NOT use their name in the logline. Always use one or two perfectly descriptive adjectives when describing your lead.
O = Obstacles. What is preventing your protag from achieving his goal? Speaking of goals…
G = Goals. What are the protag’s goal/goals?
L = Lose. What does your protag stand to lose if he/she fails to accomplish their goal? Also referred to as “stakes”.
I = Irony. It helps a logline to include irony, as it more clearly defines a conflict. A sheriff of a coastal town who is afraid of water; a heart-broken wedding singer; a garbage collector who is a compulsive clean-freak.
N = New and Unique. This is your “hook”. What is it about YOUR story that is different from all of the others in that genre? You MUST have a hook (most important).
E = Enemy. For every protagonist, there is an ANTAGONIST. Use perfectly descriptive adjectives to define your antag. The enemy MUST BE a specific person. It cannot be “the military” or “the government”. A person was properly represent that entity.